Wednesday, March 17, 2010

Chapter 1.

I am talking about the very start of your novel. The part where you grab the reader and suck them into the world you created in your head. The world that houses awesome characters, mighty conflicts and love interests galore.  What makes up a great beginning? Well, for me as a reader I want action.  I really like books that take me on a wild ride from the start. The first chapter is supposed to tell you basically what the whole book is about, right? That is what I am learning at least.

When I wrote my first draft, my first chapter was fantastic in my eyes. After learning more it was more backstory than anything else. This is not a bad thing in fact it was great for me as the writer. It helped me envision the scene more clearly and get to know my characters better-- especially my protagonist.  My CPs have helped in this department along with some open critiques. I also bought a book --Hooked by Les Edgerton.  I have only read a little of it and so far it is great. Most of the questions I have I am sure will be answered by this cute little blue book but I want to know from you.

The photo is not the best but there is a goldfish on it with a hook at the top --get it:) Anyway, I am on my fifth revision of my first chapter.  I keep going back to it. I think because I am stuck on my second chapter which is becoming trouble. Right now chapter 2 is a problem--not because of the content but there is so much to be done.  So I keep going back to chapter 1.

I have been reading first chapters of books that I have read. This has made me confused. Some books in my eyes still seem to have a lot of backstory but seem successful. Now I am not saying that my first draft would have been fine --no way it is really bad-- but what does the public like? I know what I like. The advice I have been given is to get to the action ASAP but some of these successful novels don't seem to do this --at least not to me.

Another thing I question --Is there a rule on how long your first chapter should be? I am guessing not.  I have read some that are thirty pages and some that are one. Would an editor or agent toss out a manuscript for length of the first chapter?

What do you like in your first chapter as a writer/reader?

How long do you feel a first chapter should be?

Any advice from your experience in writing a great first chapter?

Many questions I know but since I am constantly looking at this chapter it is what's on my mind. My normal lack of sleep doesn't help either. 

Since I spoke of beginnings, get over to Kelly's (Kelly's Compositions) and sign up for the First Page Blogfest takes place on April 2nd.

Happy writing and revising!