Before I start, I wanted to let you know I did start another blog. Yes, I'm crazy. Christine's Journey is my writing blog and I will be on it on a regular basis. The other one, Ramblings of an Overage YA Reader, will only be updated every so often. I will mainly have book reviews and how the adult world perceives adult YA readers. Trust me, I've had some weird moments. If you get a chance check it out.
Welcome to Writing the Next Line. This is not a new activity by any means so I can't take credit for it.
The Rules: In your comment you must continue the story so whoever is first to comment must continue from where I left off and the next person to comment must pick up from where the last comment left off and so on. Please keep each comment 1-2 lines but come back as often as you like. This post will be up for a couple of days so keep the story going. When I return, I will put the whole thing together and post it. Should be fun! The story starts below:
The clouds stretched across the full moon which made it look like it wore a collar. The shadows from the bare limbs created a spider web like pattern on the small dirt path. I took in a deep breath, inhaling the chilled winter air and walked ahead. Of course, I was the one who had to gather the firewood. Old reliable. Plus, I wasn't passed out or throwing up in a toilet, so I was the only capable one. Josie, my best friend, thought it would be a brillant idea to have a party at her father's log cabin in the middle of winter. Little did she realize, you had to keep a fire going so we wouldn't freeze to death.
I picked up a couple of sticks and placed them in a leather bag. A light breeze rustled a few dead leaves and pushed the lifeless limbs above me to create a creaking sound. I could hear Ryan's bellowing laugh, echo through the hills.
Nothing like attracting attention.The cabin wasn't far. I knew to stay close. Being in the woods, at night, by yourself, can make you a little anxious. I walked down the path further, quickening my step.
A scratching noise, like a knife to a rock, came from my right. I held my breath. It could be the trees dancing in the breeze. I hesistantly searched and saw nothing. Adrenaline began to pump through me and my body shook a little.
It's only an animal of some sort. Finish and get back to the cabin.
I continued to gather some more wood when the scratching started to my left, but this time it was closer.
Now it's your turn. Have fun!

My step quickened - but I had to remind myself not to run. Running only invited a chase.
ReplyDeleteBehind me I heard a whuff of breath and I spun around, but there was nothing.
ReplyDeleteThe scratching started again, this time to my right. I suppressed the urge to look when something grabbed me and covered my mouth.
ReplyDeleteThe hand reeked of petrol and smoke, and I chocked as I tried to breathe.
ReplyDeleteI felt hot breath curl its way around my ear and leave it cold in the frosty air.
ReplyDeletei tried to scream, but only muffled sounds came from my deep in my throat
ReplyDeleteI gathered all my strength and with all my might, I broke the person's hold around me.
ReplyDeleteI turned sharply to see who this was.
ReplyDelete"Oh my God!" I shouted. "I thought you were dead!"
"Jesus Abby, chill for a minute," he said "I'm not trying to hurt you."
ReplyDeleteHurting me was no longer my concern, why I was seeing & talking to my dead boyfriend was.
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ReplyDelete"I'll explain in a minute," he said, his voice low and tight with panic, "but first we need to get out of here."
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