No kiss blogfest--here it is. The No Kiss Blogfest. I can't believe this is the fourth one. Yikes. Time flies. Thanks to the lovely and talented Frankie Diane Mallis for hosting this event. Go check out the other participants. You will not be disappointed.
So, my entry is from my second novel, DREAM THIEVES. After all these years, I still get nervous posting things that I create. I realize that comes with the territory.
We
enter a field of wildflowers, so tall, they brush my legs. Bright yellows and
vibrant purples dot across acres of field. Rowen pulls on the reins and the
horse slows, letting out a light neigh. He jumps off, still holding onto the
reins and looks up at me. I want to sit for a minute and soak in his eyes. ”You
ready?” he says.
“What? To come down?”
He laughs, “Yes.” He places his hands on my waist and I
lay my hands on his shoulders. I swing my leg over the saddle and almost knock
him down as I fall into him. He tightens his grip, snaking his arm around my
back and lowers me to the ground. We stand there, our bodies touching and
something about it feels right. Something so familiar, but my stupid memory is
at a loss. I slide my hand around the back of his neck and catch him gazing at
me. His heart beats hard, vibrating my chest. He inches his lips towards mine.
My mind whirls because a kiss from a stranger is the last thing I need right
now. My eyes start to close. I guess my body is making a decision for me. Wisps of heat rise between us. I lick my bottom lip. You can't be too prepared.
Rowen's fingers rest just above my belt. Waiting.
Rowen's fingers rest just above my belt. Waiting.
Something nudges my back. My eyelids flutter open.
“He likes you.” I watch Rowen's lips form the words.
“What?”
“The horse. He likes you.” He smiles.
I
turn around and get a view of huge horse nostrils.
“Oh.” I pat the horse’s soft fur as he shakes his head. A wave of heat scatters across the skin on my neck. So embarrassing.
Thanks for stopping by. *goes and bites nails*Have a great day!!
Hi Christine- this was lovely! I felt like I was there in the field of wildflowers too. Great entry!
ReplyDeleteHaha, Horses can be moment killers like that but they are adorable. Wonderful scene!
ReplyDeleteHa! Oh man, the horse stopped everything. I really liked the details of the field! Nice work!!
ReplyDeleteThe almost kiss tension there was just incredible! I loved that. Would be a pleasure to read more!!
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Darned horse!
ReplyDeleteNice post... ;)
great scene. the tension was perfect.
ReplyDeleteGreat description of the landscape! And I love a horse with personality :)
ReplyDeleteOh, I can feel her mortification, leaning in, eyes closed, and he's all about the horse. Thanks for sharing a wonderful scene, alive with possibility and fun.
ReplyDeleteDamned horses. lol They have a mind all their own.
ReplyDeleteOuch. Poor girl! Great detail in this excerpt!
ReplyDeleteSuch a great excerpt - and a nice nervous bit of humor to tie off so much great tension. Fantastic blurb!
ReplyDeleteLOL! Rowan is a rake letting the horse take away the moment.
ReplyDeleteFun excerpt :)
ReplyDeleteAnd the horse steals the moment - great! The tension and humour are so well done in this excerpt!
ReplyDeleteI like the humor of this. Anytime a horse steals the show it's great.
ReplyDeletehaha...I think the horse wanted her to kiss him instead. Nice excerpt--definitely fun! :)
ReplyDeleteThis is just so cute!
ReplyDelete:) lol love this!
ReplyDeleteThis was perfection! The field of wildflowers, the horse, the incredible sexual tension -- thanks for sharing!
ReplyDeleteSaying hello from the blogfest. Thanks for sharing this fun scene! Oh, that horse, LOL!
ReplyDeleteHi Christine! I'm a few days late in checking out the entries for the No-Kiss Blogfest, but late is better than never! Thanks so much for sharing. :)
ReplyDeleteHaha this is a nice little scene you set up. One thing I wanted to mention is, there are a couple sentences -- "You can't be too prepared" and "So embarrassing" -- that only seemed to take up space rather than contribute information the audience couldn't pick up on their own. Lastly, that gosh darn horse! ;) Had to ruin the moment, didn't it?
~Wendy Lu
The Red Angel Blog